Monthly Archives: January 2011

WIP status: Must Fix

By | January 26, 2011

Currently I’m working on the second draft. About a third of the way through. Some problems I see cropping up: * I have people in the first half of the book who disappear from the second. I think they move the story along, but they need to be involved more. Must fix. * There is… Read More »

Beyond the Bars

By | January 25, 2011

I meet with a group of writers every Monday night, and we usually have a short-story competition: we get a writing prompt and we have to develop a story from it in 15 minutes. This is my short story; the writing prompt is the first line in bold, below. Note that I did make a… Read More »