WIP status: Must Fix

By | January 26, 2011

Currently I’m working on the second draft. About a third of the way through.

Some problems I see cropping up:
* I have people in the first half of the book who disappear from the second. I think they move the story along, but they need to be involved more. Must fix.
* There is a big plot hole in the first third, an obvious “well of course people will notice” type of event. Must fix.
* Do not like the ending. Justice is served, but it’s done badly. Must fix.

Oh, and things like language and pacing and character development and MacGuffins. Must fix.